Week 3, Friday class

Class Critique

Today we paired with other groups and looked at each others presentations so far. It was quite interesting because we were paired with someone who had a similar brief to ours. Seeing the way they approached it in comparison to ours. We also spent time going across the streams looking at everyones work. Overall todays class highlighted a few things we are missing - an opening page, facts / quotes are the biggest ones at the moment. Also the lecturers are wanting us to go in a different direction for our visuals, heading towards photography, rather than illustration / graphics. They think that will give us more context. They want our visuals to inform rather than just illustrate so we'll work on that before next class.