Today we paired with other groups and looked at each others presentations so far. It was quite interesting because we were paired with someone who had a similar brief to ours. Seeing the way they approached it in comparison to ours. We also spent time going across the streams looking at everyones work. Overall todays class highlighted a few things we are missing - an opening page, facts / quotes are the biggest ones at the moment. Also the lecturers are wanting us to go in a different direction for our visuals, heading towards photography, rather than illustration / graphics. They think that will give us more context. They want our visuals to inform rather than just illustrate so we'll work on that before next class.